My knees and arms are crossed and I’m trying to breathe slowly and evenly. My fingers are cold, and I’m gritting my teeth. Shoulders tight. Mind buzzing furiously–put something down. Now.
I just did.
Be in your character. Write the emotion. Write from where you dream.
I closed my eyes and went into my dreamspace. I had no idea how to begin this blog, so I connected to the place I was in and wrote about that.
Sometimes the ideas come whirling out from mind to fingers to keys, and sometimes writing is like, well, pulling teeth. I am sure you know what I mean.
What I am blogging about today is: Don’t merely write about your character, be your character–particularly in what are, or should be, emotion-filled moments or scenes. If you ever wanted to be an actor, this is your chance. I close my eyes, relax, breathe deep and slow, and imagine I am that person in the situation I have created. How do I feel? What do I feel? What is my body doing? What am I thinking? Can I think? What do I hear, smell, see?
Being your character is handy for other scenes, as well. Your character is lying in the grass. How does the world look from down there? Does she see a ladybug crawling up a blade? Is the grass green with spring or dry in summer? What do you smell? Does she have allergies that make her nose tickle or make her sneeze, her eyes water? What else does she feel? Is the grass damp from early morning dew?
Of course, you can’t bring this kind of detail into every scene. Detail only the scenes where such moments are important to character development, mood, plot, etc. Choosing which moments are important is part of what good writing is all about–when to show and when to tell. For example, perhaps you have a male character who, so far, has shown only aggression, anger, and contempt toward everyone. You might have a key scene where, when alone, he shows kindness and compassion for a hurt animal. This scene would be best written in great detail in order to impress it upon your reader’s mind. Aha, this character has more to him than he shows to the world–what does this scene mean? You have made a flat, one-dimensional character intriguing. Readers like mysteries and surprises, as long as they make sense.
How do I describe all these emotions? Every serious writer should have a good Thesaurus. Mine is a big, fat Roget’s International Thesaurus, and I have sticky-tagged much of it for quick reference. Even better, a couple awesome ladies have just published The Emotion Thesaurus for all us writers which you can find on their blog here. For a limited time they are giving away an Emotion Amplifier download. Check it out–their blog is one of the best on the web for writers.
I watched Game of Thrones last night and what a scene between Lady Stark and Jamie Lanister! I watched her as he went on about Ned Stark’s betrayal of her with another woman and imagined how I would write the emotions she was feeling at that moment. Powerful stuff!